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Police say two sheep dead after Canberra property invaders injured flock

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  • the headline was changed: ACT Police investigating after say two sheep found 'deliberately dead after Canberra property invaders injured flock

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  • Police are investigating after multiple sheep at a Canberra property were allegedly rounded up and injured, causing two to die.
  • ACT Policing today said they were seeking public help after the incident of animal cruelty at a rural property in Tuggeranong on Wednesday night.
  • Police allege the property was also ransacked, and a "large amount of disruption" caused to the premises.

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Police are investigating after multiple sheep at a Canberra property were allegedly rounded up and injured, causing two to die.

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ACT Policing today said they were seeking public help after the incident of animal cruelty at a rural property in Tuggeranong on Wednesday night.

A statement from police said the sheep were found in a holding pen by the property's owner on Thursday morning.

Police allege the property was also ransacked, and a "large amount of disruption" caused to the premises.

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  • ABC News Police say two sheep dead after Canberra property invaders injured flock plain
  • The West Australian Sheep deliberately injured, two die from injuries on rural property in Canberra: Cops plain

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