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AFL grand final: Brisbane Lions Lachie Neale banned for decider against former club Fremantle Dockers

The West Australian Chris Robinson
Summary
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  • the headline was changed: AFL grand final: Brisbane Lions Lachie Neale facing suspension that would rule him out of banned for decider against former club Fremantle Dockers

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From the report

Lachie Neale is set to cop a one-game ban that would see him miss Saturday’s grand final clash against his former club Fremantle.

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This is a summary. The indicators are not. The scores were measured over this summary alone, which is less of the article than we would like and makes them less certain.

How outlets headlined it

Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.

  • The West Australian AFL grand final: Brisbane Lions Lachie Neale banned for decider against former club Fremantle Dockers plain
  • The West Australian AFL Grand Final: Retiring Fremantle Dockers star Sam Switkowski on his last game, fatherhood and immortality plain
  • The West Australian AFL Grand Final: Fremantle Dockers to wear purple in decider plain
  • The West Australian Fremantle Dockers Isaiah Dudley and Judd McVee push for Wharfie Time to be played at AFL grand final plain
  • The West Australian Brisbane Lions star Lachie Neale needs a miracle to be cleared of report to play in AFL Grand Final plain

How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it

No other newsroom we read has filed on this event, so there is nothing to compare it with yet.

Also covered by The West Australian. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
The West Australianas they published this story 5.6

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The same event elsewhere

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The West Australian AFL Grand Final: Retiring Fremantle Dockers star Sam Switkowski on his last game, fatherhood and immortality Niral 7.5 political 0 The West Australian AFL Grand Final: Fremantle Dockers to wear purple in decider Niral 2 political 0 The West Australian Fremantle Dockers Isaiah Dudley and Judd McVee push for Wharfie Time to be played at AFL grand final Niral 4.8 political 0 The West Australian Brisbane Lions star Lachie Neale needs a miracle to be cleared of report to play in AFL Grand Final Niral 2.1 political 0