Melbourne is set for a warm finish to the week, with both Thursday and Friday reaching 26C.
A cool change arrives late on Friday afternoon, bringing the risk of showers and even a storm.
Colder air arrives early in the morning, and the top will be just 17C — though it’ll sit around 13C or 14C for much of the day, including for the AFL grand final itself.
We’ll keep you across the weather timing right through grand final day, on 7NEWS Melbourne.
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Thursday brings plenty of sunshine. Grand final day has always been a bit of a lottery in late September but this year the timing is about as poor as it gets.
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Melbourne is set for a warm finish to the week, with both Thursday and Friday reaching 26C.
Thursday brings plenty of sunshine, while Friday sees cloud building through the day. For anyone in Victoria with its public holiday, there’s a good stretch there to make the most of.
A cool change arrives late on Friday afternoon, bringing the risk of showers and even a storm.
Saturday is a different story altogether. Colder air arrives early in the morning, and the top will be just 17C — though it’ll sit around 13C or 14C for much of the day, including for the AFL grand final itself.
It comes down to a trough and cold front arriving later on Friday and into early Saturday, combining with a feed of moisture stretching right across the continent.
We’ll keep you across the weather timing right through grand final day, on 7NEWS Melbourne.
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