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AFL LIVE: McCluggage the hero as Lions break Hawks hearts; Bottles thrown at umpires despite right decision

The Age Roy Ward, Russell Bennett, Danny Russell
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  • the headline was changed: AFL LIVE: Huge McCluggage Lions star becomes a the hero in front of 97,835, breaking as Lions break Hawks hearts; Bottles thrown at umpires despite right decision
  • the headline was changed: AFL LIVE: Lohmann the showman: Gun ignites the Huge McCluggage: Lions star becomes a hero in the clutch after Neale floored at the opening ball-upfront of 97,835, breaking Hawks’ hearts
  • the headline was changed: AFL LIVE: Lohmann the showman: Gun ignites the Lions in the clutch after Neale floored at the opening ball-upbut Hawks’ highlight reel sets the first-half tone. Can Lions roar back?
  • the headline was changed: AFL LIVE: Hawks, Lions trade highlights in an MCG prelim thriller after Neale floored at the opening ball-up, but Hawks’ highlight reel sets the first-half tone. Can Lions roar back?
  • the headline was changed: AFL LIVE: Perfect conditions, mammoth crowd greet the Hawks, and Lions for mouth-watering trade highlights in an MCG prelim thriller after Neale floored at opening ball-up

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The Hawks and Lions battle at the MCG for the right to face Fremantle in the AFL grand final.

Mark taken at Hawthorn-Essendon game
Mark taken at Hawthorn-Essendon game Tom Reynolds from Melbourne, Australia / Wikimedia Commons, CC BY

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WAtoday AFL LIVE: McCluggage the hero as Lions break Hawks hearts; Bottles thrown at umpires despite right decision Niral 8.5 political 0 Brisbane Times AFL LIVE: McCluggage the hero as Lions break Hawks hearts; Bottles thrown at umpires despite right decision Niral 8.5 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald AFL LIVE: McCluggage the hero as Lions break Hawks hearts; Bottles thrown at umpires despite right decision Niral 8.5 political 0