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Interstate footy fans addressed with flight delays and cancellations on Saturday as they raced to reach Melbourne in time for the AFL Grand Final.
About 100,000 fans packed into the MCG on Saturday for an all-interstate final between the Fremantle Dockers and the Brisbane Lions.
Two Brisbane flights were cancelled and nine were delayed by up to two hours, meaning some fans landed after the 2.30pm starting time.
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Flight cancellations cause heartache for interstate footy fans
Interstate footy fans addressed with flight delays and cancellations on Saturday as they raced to reach Melbourne in time for the AFL Grand Final.
Melbourne airport said a number of flights had been cancelled due to poor weather causing low visibility, with rain forecast for much of the morning and early afternoon.
About 100,000 fans packed into the MCG on Saturday for an all-interstate final between the Fremantle Dockers and the Brisbane Lions.
A Qantas flight from Perth scheduled to land at 10.30am was cancelled and a further two were delayed, including another Qantas flight scheduled to arrive before the bounce at 1.40pm which was delayed by around an hour. Two Brisbane flights were cancelled and nine were delayed by up to two hours, meaning some fans landed after the 2.30pm starting time.
Among those racing to make the game was journalist and TV host Brooke Boney, who was scheduled to land at 11.35am, which was pushed back by an hour. She made it to the ground just in time for Kylie Minogue’s pre-match entertainment.
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