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Cats snare the Giants’ greatest player in free agency coup

WAtoday Jon Pierik
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Changed after publishing · 1 edit
  • the headline was changed: Blues lodge papers for Swans spearhead as Cats snare the Giants’ greatest player in free agency window openscoup

Outlets edit stories after they go out, usually without saying so. We keep what we saw the first time.

From the report

The AFL free agency window is open and the first deal has dropped.

How outlets headlined it

Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.

  • WAtoday Cats snare the Giants’ greatest player in free agency coup plain
  • Brisbane Times Revealed: Compo for Greene as Cats snare the Giants’ greatest player in free agency coup plain

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How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it

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Also covered by Brisbane Times, The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

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The same event elsewhere

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Brisbane Times Revealed: Compo for Greene as Cats snare the Giants’ greatest player in free agency coup Niral 6.6 · calm political 0 The Age Revealed: Compo for Greene as Cats snare the Giants’ greatest player in free agency coup Niral 6.6 · calm political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Revealed: Compo for Greene as Cats snare the Giants’ greatest player in free agency coup Niral 6.6 · calm political 0