The West AustralianA child has been shot in the face and neck in Sydney’s northwest.
Sydney, NSW
Boy, 11, undergoing lifesaving treatment after suspected accidental shooting in Sydney’s northwest
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- the headline was changed:
Boy, 11,
shot in face and neck at homeundergoing lifesaving treatment after suspected accidental shooting in Sydney’s northwest
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 9.5 |
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