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AFL finals: Brisbane Lions keep three-peat dream alive as last-gasp McCluggage goal breaks Hawthorn hearts

The Guardian Australia (Sport)
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  • Brisbane will face Fremantle for a shot at a premiership “three-peat” after surviving an almighty last-quarter fightback from Hawthorn to win an all-time great AFL preliminary final by nine points.
  • The Lions then won the centre bounce and Kai Lohmann kicked another goal on the siren to give them a nine-point win, 20.11 to 19.8, in front of 97,835 fans at the MCG on Saturday.
  • Brisbane will play Fremantle in next Saturday’s decider – the first time the teams have played each other in a final.
  • Trailing by 22 points in the second term and 16 points in the third, Brisbane went on a scoring attack that appeared to have decided the game, before Hawthorn’s outstanding rally.

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Lions defeat Hawks 20.11 to 19.8 in AFL preliminary final.

Reigning premiers to meet Fremantle in grand final at the MCG.

Brisbane will face Fremantle for a shot at a premiership “three-peat” after surviving an almighty last-quarter fightback from Hawthorn to win an all-time great AFL preliminary final by nine points.

A holding-the-ball decision against Hawks defender Jarman Impey gave Hugh McCluggage a free kick and he kicked the match-deciding goal with 18 seconds left.

The Lions then won the centre bounce and Kai Lohmann kicked another goal on the siren to give them a nine-point win, 20.11 to 19.8, in front of 97,835 fans at the MCG on Saturday.

Crazy, McCluggage told the Seven Network.

Brisbane will play Fremantle in next Saturday’s decider – the first time the teams have played each other in a final.

The Lions are aiming to become the third team this century to pull off a premiership three-peat.

Hawthorn’s Nick Watson, dubbed “The Wizard”, was best afield with a magical six goals, and he was instrumental in their last-quarter charge.

Trailing by 22 points in the second term and 16 points in the third, Brisbane went on a scoring attack that appeared to have decided the game, before Hawthorn’s outstanding rally.

Hawks Jack Gunston and Lewis hit the scoreboard, while Josh Ward was huge.

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