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Cars, drums and 2am kebabs: How Jim and Adam became ‘mates at first sight’

WAtoday Stephen Lacey
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  • the headline was changed: Cars, drums and kebabs at 2am kebabs: How Jim and Adam became ‘mates at first sight’

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From the report

Jim Hull, a mechanic and motorsport driver, and Adam Morris, a drummer, DJ and motoring enthusiast, review second-hand cars on their YouTube channel.

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How outlets headlined it

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  • WAtoday Cars, drums and 2am kebabs: How Jim and Adam became ‘mates at first sight’ plain
  • Brisbane Times Cars, drums and kebabs at 2am: How Jim and Adam became ‘mates at first sight’ plain

How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it

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Also covered by Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald, The Age. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
WAtodayas they published this story 4.1

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Brisbane Times Cars, drums and kebabs at 2am: How Jim and Adam became ‘mates at first sight’ Niral 4.1 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Cars, drums and 2am kebabs: How Jim and Adam became ‘mates at first sight’ Niral 4.1 political 0 The Age Cars, drums and 2am kebabs: How Jim and Adam became ‘mates at first sight’ Niral 4.1 political 0