There were few children and if there were roughly 10,000 Americans in the crowd, there appeared to be fewer women. Friday was the start of a four-year deal to have the NFL in Melbourne.
Sport / Melbourne, VIC
Crowd of 100,000 laps up sensory experience as NFL woos Melbourne | Jack Snape
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| The Guardian Australia (Sport)as they published this story | 17.6 |
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