Melbourne remains undefeated following a 34-point victory over Carlton.
Geelong recorded its fifth straight win over the season after beating Collingwood by 41 points.
A day after Hawthorn manufactured an upset to topple defending premiers North Melbourne, the Demons knew a win over the Blues would lift them into top spot on the ladder and establish a 6-0 start to their campaign.
Aishling Moloney produced a goal-of-the-year contender to help Geelong to a 14.6 to 7.7 triumph over Collingwood at Victoria Park.
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Melbourne remains undefeated following a 34-point victory over Carlton.
The Demons' win came at a cost, with Georgia Gall leaving the field with an ankle injury.
Geelong recorded its fifth straight win over the season after beating Collingwood by 41 points.
Melbourne is the only unbeaten side after six rounds of the AFLW season, producing a statement 34-point win over Carlton at Casey Fields.
A day after Hawthorn manufactured an upset to topple defending premiers North Melbourne, the Demons knew a win over the Blues would lift them into top spot on the ladder and establish a 6-0 start to their campaign.
Midfielder Olivia Purcell was at the centre of the campaign, slotting two majors, while Jorja Livingstone scored on debut in the final quarter.
Aishling Moloney produced a goal-of-the-year contender to help Geelong to a 14.6 to 7.7 triumph over Collingwood at Victoria Park.
Midfielders Nina Morrison, Mikayla Bowen and Georgie Prespakis were prolific for the Cats, while Moloney and Chloe Scheer grabbed three and four majors respectively.
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