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Divers spend six hours clearing river of waste

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  • A team of divers from Northampton Scuba School arranged a six-hour clean-up of the River Nene in Northampton.
  • Organisers at Northampton Scuba School said they are committed to removing waste from the River Nene on a regular basis and plan to return in the coming months.
  • The Northampton Canoe and Kayak Club also provided a ladder to help divers get in and out of the water safely.

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A team of divers from Northampton Scuba School arranged a six-hour clean-up of the River Nene in Northampton.

The event on Saturday 19 September was organised alongside Northampton Active and Northampton Rowing Club, with the aim of clearing as much rubbish from the river as possible.

Organisers at Northampton Scuba School said they are committed to removing waste from the River Nene on a regular basis and plan to return in the coming months.

The clean-up team was loaned two canoes from Northampton Active, which were used to support the divers.

The Northampton Canoe and Kayak Club also provided a ladder to help divers get in and out of the water safely.

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