Ella Roberts has celebrated her 50-game AFLW milestone in grand style, producing an effort as West Coast survived a frenetic Essendon comeback to post a 10-point win at Windy Hill.
In the end, it was Essendon's missed chances that resulted in them falling just short, with the Bombers kicking 2.7 to 0.1 in the final quarter as West Coast clung on for the 6.9 to 4.11 win.
Over at Whitten Oval, the Western Bulldogs improved to 5–2 with a 13-point win over lowly Port Adelaide.
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Ella Roberts has celebrated her 50-game AFLW milestone in grand style, producing an effort as West Coast survived a frenetic Essendon comeback to post a 10-point win at Windy Hill.
The Eagles led by as much as 34 points during the third quarter of Friday's match and the margin was still 28 points at the final change, with Essendon scoring just two goals up until that moment.
In the end, it was Essendon's missed chances that resulted in them falling just short, with the Bombers kicking 2.7 to 0.1 in the final quarter as West Coast clung on for the 6.9 to 4.11 win.
Maddy Prespakis and Steph Wales fought hard for the Bombers, who slumped to a 0–7 record.
Over at Whitten Oval, the Western Bulldogs improved to 5–2 with a 13-point win over lowly Port Adelaide.
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