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Ella Heads cops big ban for bump that broke star Demon's jaw

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  • Port Adelaide's Ella Heads has been banned for three games for a high bump that broke the jaw of Melbourne star Eliza McNamara.
  • McNamara had just fired off a handball in Sunday's 51-point win when Heads ran in and collected the midfielder front-on with her shoulder.
  • The 24-year-old was taken to hospital, with the Demons confirming on Monday she had undergone surgery, with no timeline set for her return.
  • In other tribunal news, West Coast's Abbygail Bushby was handed a one-match ban for her collision with the Brisbane Lions' Sophie Peters.

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Port Adelaide's Ella Heads has been banned for three games for a high bump that broke the jaw of Melbourne star Eliza McNamara.

McNamara had surgery on her jaw and there is no timeline for her return.

McNamara had just fired off a handball in Sunday's 51-point win when Heads ran in and collected the midfielder front-on with her shoulder.

A dazed McNamara had blood coming out from her face as she was helped from the ground.

The 24-year-old was taken to hospital, with the Demons confirming on Monday she had undergone surgery, with no timeline set for her return.

"That was a really poor challenge," former AFLW star Kate McCarthy said.

In other tribunal news, West Coast's Abbygail Bushby was handed a one-match ban for her collision with the Brisbane Lions' Sophie Peters.

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