EngadgetThe US Department of Defense announced a new initiative that it says will identify the technological needs for future wars.
Elon Musk and Palmer Luckey will advise the government on the future of warfare
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- Engadget Elon Musk and Palmer Luckey will advise the government on the future of warfare plain
- TechCrunch The Pentagon taps Elon Musk and Palmer Luckey to help decide what the military should do next plain
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| Outlet | Niral Score | Adjectives | Sourcing | Sentiment | Happiness |
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| Engadgetas they published this story | 9.6 | 1 | 14 | -0.1 | 23.8 |
| TechCrunch | 10.4 | 10 | 25 | -0.0 | 50.3 |
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