The shark has been identified and when conditions allow, it will be killed to recover any coronial evidence.
Business / Perth, WA
Minister orders shark to be destroyed as family shares grief over Perth swimmer’s death
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- the headline was changed:
‘Extraordinary step’:Minister orders sharkthat killed 63-year-old Perth swimmerto be destroyed as family shares grief over Perth swimmer’s death
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How outlets headlined it
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- The Sydney Morning Herald Minister orders shark to be destroyed as family shares grief over Perth swimmer’s death plain
- The West Australian Man fatally attacked by shark as emergency services shut Sorrento Beach plain
- The Sydney Morning Herald Man feared dead after suspected shark attack plain
- ABC News Swimmer dies in shark attack at Perth beach plain
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The Sydney Morning Herald
Police continue search for missing Perth swimmer after
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How each outlet filed it
Also covered by The West Australian, The Sydney Morning Herald, The Age, Brisbane Times. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.
| Outlet | Niral Score | Adjectives | Sourcing | Sentiment | Happiness |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| The Sydney Morning Heraldas they published this story | 5 | 0 | 34 | -0.5 | 14.9 |
| ABC News | 8.6 | 5 | 74 | -1.1 | 16 |
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