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Heartbreak in the heart of Fremantle as thousands watch Dockers fall short

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  • the headline was changed: Fans flood Fremantle for grand final Heartbreak in the heart of Fremantle as thousands watch Dockers fall short
  • the headline was changed: Fans flood Fremantle for finals grand final heartbreak
  • the headline was changed: Finals fever grips Fans flood Fremantle as Dockers battle for flagfinals heartbreak
  • the headline was changed: Fans ride wave of grand final across Finals fever grips Fremantle as Dockers battle for flag
  • the headline was changed: Fans ride the wave of the grand final first quarter across Fremantle

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  • In the heart and home of the Dockers — the City of Fremantle — it's hard to escape the colour purple.
  • People walking down the famous cappuccino strip this week watched in awe as artist Jerome Davenport painted a mural in honour of the Fremantle Dockers.
  • The local school has temporarily rebranded as the "Fremantle Dockers College" and allowed students to dress up in purple on Friday for a gold coin donation to one of the team's charities of choice, the Starlight Children's Foundation.
  • Public screens have been set up at several locations across the city for a grand final watch party, with 40,000 people expected to attend.
  • Regardless of Saturday's result, there's no doubt in the minds of locals that the Dockers are winners.

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In the heart and home of the Dockers it's hard to escape the colour purple.

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In the heart and home of the Dockers — the City of Fremantle — it's hard to escape the colour purple.

As history beckons for the AFL team, flags and signs line every wall and corner of the city centre, and purple scarves have become the uniform.

People walking down the famous cappuccino strip this week watched in awe as artist Jerome Davenport painted a mural in honour of the Fremantle Dockers.

"I really do hope that this inspires a few people, and the players," he said after finishing the giant work in just four days.

"I sat here 13 years ago in this street and watched them the first time they were in the finals.

As the Dockers head towards making what could be premiership history, business has been rife in purple cannolis, ice creams, beer and hot dogs.

The local school has temporarily rebranded as the "Fremantle Dockers College" and allowed students to dress up in purple on Friday for a gold coin donation to one of the team's charities of choice, the Starlight Children's Foundation.

Principal Stan Koios said the city felt electric.

"We thought, let's get on board the euphoria that started with the Dockers and their success … let's get a bit quirky and crazy," he said.

Public screens have been set up at several locations across the city for a grand final watch party, with 40,000 people expected to attend.

Roads in central Fremantle have been closed, and public transport is free for the day.

Regardless of Saturday's result, there's no doubt in the minds of locals that the Dockers are winners.

"They are the best team in all of Australia; nothing can compare to them," student Nathan Campisi said.

Another local, Juliet Kirsten, said the town had watched the team grow and was now ready to see them make their mark in history.

"We've seen the club grow over the years, and Freo just responded over the years with the community vibe and everything, and it's just gone exponentially better and better," she said.

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