The West AustralianAndrew Brayshaw famously pinned a note in some of his teammates’ lockers which read: ‘The first 22 men to win a premiership at Fremantle will be immortal.’ Now, the Dockers are only one win away.
Fremantle, WA
Fremantle vice-captain Andrew Brayshaw delighted Dockers are one win away from meeting ‘immortal’ pledge
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The Dockers are only one win away.
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 8.8 |
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