The West AustralianFour people accused of attempting to murder a man by shooting him clean through the liver also allegedly tried to burn evidence of the attack.
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Hamilton Hill attempted murder: Court hears details of shooting as four co-accused face court
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Four people accused of trying to murder a man by shooting him clean through the liver also allegedly tried to burn evidence of the attack.
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Headline as published: Hamilton Hill attempted murder: Court hears gruesome details of shooting as four co-accused face court
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 19.5 |
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