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Housemate’s startling discovery at alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene

The Sydney Morning Herald Michaela Whitbourn
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Images of items dumped by alleged double murderer Beau Lamarre-Condon in a Cronulla skip bin were among other exhibits released publicly in his trial.

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  • The Sydney Morning Herald Housemate’s startling discovery at alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene plain
  • WAtoday The bullet hole and the cartridge case: Images of alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene revealed plain

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The Sydney Morning Heraldas they published this story 1.6

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WAtoday The bullet hole and the cartridge case: Images of alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene revealed Niral 10.9 · mostly calm political 0 The Age The bullet hole and the cartridge case: Images of alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene revealed Niral 10.9 · mostly calm political 0 Brisbane Times The bullet hole and the cartridge case: Images of alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene revealed Niral 10.9 · mostly calm political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald The bullet hole and the cartridge case: Images of alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene revealed Niral 10.9 · mostly calm political 0 Brisbane Times Housemate’s startling discovery at alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene Niral 1.6 · calm political 0 The Age Housemate’s startling discovery at alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene Niral 1.6 · calm political 0 WAtoday Housemate’s startling discovery at alleged Lamarre-Condon crime scene Niral 1.6 · calm political 0