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Jake Kolodjashnij retires after Cats concussion deal scandal

WAtoday Hannah Kennelly
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Geelong premiership defender Jake Kolodjashnij has been medically retired from AFL football, after being at the centre of a secret concussion deal.

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  • WAtoday Jake Kolodjashnij retires after Cats concussion deal scandal plain
  • Brisbane Times Jake Kolodjashnij retires after Cats concussion scandal; Pearce avoids Achilles surgery plain
  • The West Australian Pearce 'thankfully' avoids surgery on Achilles injury plain

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WAtodayas they published this story 13.1

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Brisbane Times Jake Kolodjashnij retires after Cats concussion scandal; Pearce avoids Achilles surgery Niral 8.4 · calm political 0 The Age Jake Kolodjashnij retires after Cats concussion scandal; Pearce avoids Achilles surgery Niral 8.4 · calm political 0 The West Australian Pearce 'thankfully' avoids surgery on Achilles injury Niral 30.5 · loaded political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Jake Kolodjashnij retires after Cats concussion scandal; Pearce avoids Achilles surgery Niral 8.4 · calm political 0