West Ham came from two goals down to snatch a draw from a London derby at Millwall.
The Hammers, sitting top of the Championship and looking for a fifth straight win, finished their first meeting with their rivals since 2012 with 10 men after Kanté saw red.
In years gone by a Mark Noble, a Julian Dicks or a Billy Bonds would have reciprocated, but West Ham did not put a tackle in throughout the first half.
Bowen hit the side-netting before West Ham hauled themselves level with 10 minutes left when Mavropanos headed home Manor Solomon’s cross.
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West Ham came from two goals down to snatch a draw from a London derby at Millwall. The Lions were leading at half-time through goals from Caleb Taylor and Camiel Neghli, but the visitors responded through Mohamadou Kanté and Konstantinos Mavropanos.
The Hammers, sitting top of the Championship and looking for a fifth straight win, finished their first meeting with their rivals since 2012 with 10 men after Kanté saw red.
The Metropolitan Police had 400 officers on hand, having thrown a ring of steel around part of London to ensure there was no repeat of the violence that has marred this fixture in previous seasons.
It took 15 seconds for Jenson Metcalfe to set the tone, going in hard on the West Ham captain, Jarrod Bowen. In years gone by a Mark Noble, a Julian Dicks or a Billy Bonds would have reciprocated, but West Ham did not put a tackle in throughout the first half.
The West Ham manager, Nuno Espírito Santo, threw on Kanté and Pablo Felipe at the break to add a bit of muscle to his fragile side.
Bowen hit the side-netting before West Ham hauled themselves level with 10 minutes left when Mavropanos headed home Manor Solomon’s cross.
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