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Lachie Neale to miss grand final after AFL tribunal decision

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  • the headline was changed: Live: Lachie Neale to miss grand final after AFL tribunal decision
  • the headline was changed: Live: Lachie Neale set to learn miss grand final fate at after AFL tribunal decision
  • the headline was changed: Live: Lachie Neale fights set to clear his name learn grand final fate at tribunal as AFL argues 'very clear strike'tribunal
  • the headline was changed: Live: Neale reveals Ginnivan chat as he fights to clear his name at AFL tribunal as AFL argues 'very clear strike'
  • the headline was changed: Live: Lachie Neale's grand final dreams on the line Neale reveals Ginnivan chat as he fights to clear name at AFL tribunal

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  • The Brisbane Lions head to the AFL tribunal to challenge Lachie Neale's ban for striking Hawthorn's Jack Ginnivan, in the hopes of freeing the dual Brownlow medallist for the grand final.
  • The Brisbane Lions will be hoping to overturn the one-week ban at today's hearing.
  • We will have to wait a while to find out whether Lachie Neale joins this list or not.
  • Hello, good afternoon and welcome to ABC's live coverage of the AFL Tribunal hearing for Brisbane's Lachie Neale ahead of the grand final.

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The Brisbane Lions head to the AFL tribunal to challenge Lachie Neale's ban for striking Hawthorn's Jack Ginnivan, in the hopes of freeing the dual Brownlow medallist for the grand final.

Neale's "gut-punch" on Ginnivan could mean the former Brisbane co-captain has played his last game for the Lions, as the team prepares to face Fremantle on Saturday seeking a second premiership three-peat in club history.

The Brisbane Lions will be hoping to overturn the one-week ban at today's hearing.

It has to be said that several AFL players have been banned for gut punches this season alone.

We will have to wait a while to find out whether Lachie Neale joins this list or not.

The ball was in or near Brisbane's forward 50 when Hawthorn's Jack Ginnivan clashed with Lions forward Eric Hipwood.

The ball had moved on, and as Hipwood lay on the ground, Neale ran past Ginnivan and appeared to swing at the Hawthorn player's stomach.

Hello, good afternoon and welcome to ABC's live coverage of the AFL Tribunal hearing for Brisbane's Lachie Neale ahead of the grand final.

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  • ABC News Lachie Neale to miss grand final after AFL tribunal decision plain
  • ABC News (Just In) Why the AFL tribunal upheld Neale's grand final ban plain
  • WAtoday Neale reacts after one-game ban overturned plain
  • The West Australian AFL grand final: Brisbane coach Chris Fagan says Lions planned for Lachie Neale not to play due to suspension plain
  • ABC News (Just In) Standing room only at AFL Grand Final parade plain
  • The West Australian Captains lead from the back in AFL grand final plain

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ABC Newsas they published this story 12.9 5 6 0.1 41.4
ABC News (Just In) 9.7 15 68 0.1 49.7
ABC News (Just In) 9.9 12 67 -0.1 58.3
Mundane Readneutralized from ABC News (Just In) 7.1 12 68 -0.1 49.7

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