The Real Mallorca goalkeeper Iván “Pichu” Cuéllar suffered a serious head injury when “a large structure” at the club’s training ground canteen collapsed on him.
Despite the alarm caused by the accident, Mallorca said the 42-year-old keeper was recovering well, as doctors monitored his condition and ruled out further complications.
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42-year-old suffers ‘serious head injury’ at training base.
Cuéllar recovering in hospital after accident.
The Real Mallorca goalkeeper Iván “Pichu” Cuéllar suffered a serious head injury when “a large structure” at the club’s training ground canteen collapsed on him.
The club said Cuéllar was taken to hospital on Monday after the incident at the Ciutat Esportiva Antonio Asensio before the team’s scheduled training session.
Despite the alarm caused by the accident, Mallorca said the 42-year-old keeper was recovering well, as doctors monitored his condition and ruled out further complications.
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