The West AustralianEmergency services are scouring the waters off Sorrento Beach after a fatal shark attack this morning.
Person attacked by shark on Sorrento Beach as horrified onlookers recount details
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Man killedPerson attacked by shark on Sorrento Beach as horrified onlookers recount chilling details
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Headline as published: Person attacked by shark on Sorrento Beach as horrified onlookers recount chilling details
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 30.9 |
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