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Mass shooting at a house party in South Africa kills 11

The West Australian Staff Writers
Summary

From the report

Three gunmen have killed at least 11 people including a woman who was believed to be pregnant in a late-night attack at a house party in South Africa.

This is a summary. The indicators are not. The scores were measured over this summary alone, which is less of the article than we would like and makes them less certain.

How outlets headlined it

Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.

  • The West Australian Mass shooting at a house party in South Africa kills 11 plain
  • WAtoday Mass shooting in South Africa leaves 11 dead plain

How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it

No other newsroom we read has filed on this event, so there is nothing to compare it with yet.

Also covered by WAtoday, Brisbane Times, The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
The West Australianas they published this story 9.7

Also reported by

6 Australian outlets reported this story. These are the ones we do not read; their headlines are matched to this one automatically, so an occasional match may be a different story.

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The same event elsewhere

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WAtoday Mass shooting in South Africa leaves 11 dead Niral 12.9 political 0 Brisbane Times Mass shooting in South Africa leaves 11 dead Niral 12.9 political 0 The Age Mass shooting in South Africa leaves 11 dead Niral 12.9 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Mass shooting in South Africa leaves 11 dead Niral 12.9 political 0