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Mia Lay honoured on National Police Remembrance Day

Brisbane Times
Summary

From the report

A young police officer killed in a car crash in Sydney last week is among those being honoured for National Police Remembrance Day.

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  • Brisbane Times Mia Lay honoured on National Police Remembrance Day plain
  • WAtoday Fallen Victorian officers honoured in day of remembrance plain

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Outlet Niral Score
Brisbane Timesas they published this story 8.3

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The Age Mia Lay honoured on National Police Remembrance Day Niral 8.3 · calm political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Mia Lay honoured on National Police Remembrance Day Niral 8.3 · calm political 0 WAtoday Fallen Victorian officers honoured in day of remembrance Niral 4.8 · calm political 0 WAtoday Mia Lay honoured on National Police Remembrance Day Niral 8.3 · calm political 0 The Age Fallen Victorian officers honoured in day of remembrance Niral 4.8 · calm political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Fallen Victorian officers honoured in day of remembrance Niral 4.8 · calm political 0 Brisbane Times Fallen Victorian officers honoured in day of remembrance Niral 4.8 · calm political 0