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Missing 13yo Holly last seen in Banks on Sunday

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  • A 13-year-old Canberra girl Holly Lane has been reported missing after she was last seen in Banks on Sunday afternoon.
  • Anyone who has seen Holly Lane or who may have any information regarding her whereabouts is urged to contact ACT Policing on 131 444, quoting reference number 8511826.
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A 13-year-old Canberra girl Holly Lane has been reported missing after she was last seen in Banks on Sunday afternoon.

ACT Policing is seeking the public's help to locate missing teenager, who has not been seen or heard from since 2.45pm on Sunday, September 27.

Holly's family and the police hold concerns for her welfare and are requesting the public's help to locate her.

Anyone who has seen Holly Lane or who may have any information regarding her whereabouts is urged to contact ACT Policing on 131 444, quoting reference number 8511826.

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Shortened to 1 minute of reading, this version reads 7.1 on the Niral Score.

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Mundane Readneutralized from The Canberra Times 6.5 3 58 -0.2 32.4

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