Matthew Renshaw became the second Aussie to pick up an injury in the dead rubber third ODI against South Africa when he was hit on the forearm while fielding.
More Aussie concern as Renshaw hit in forearm
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- Brisbane Times More Aussie concern as Renshaw hit in forearm plain
- The Age Green suffers fresh injury blow plain
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| Brisbane Timesas they published this story | 4.2 |
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The same event elsewhere
7 other outlets filed this story. The scoreboard above is what they did differently.
The Age
More Aussie concern as Renshaw hit in forearm
Niral 4.2 · calm
political 0
The Age
Green suffers fresh injury blow
Niral 9.6 · calm
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
More Aussie concern as Renshaw hit in forearm
Niral 4.2 · calm
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Green suffers fresh injury blow
Niral 9.6 · calm
political 0
WAtoday
More Aussie concern as Renshaw hit in forearm
Niral 4.2 · calm
political 0
WAtoday
Green suffers fresh injury blow
Niral 9.6 · calm
political 0
Brisbane Times
Green suffers fresh injury blow
Niral 9.6 · calm
political 0