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Mother accused of driving off boat ramp in failed attempt to murder her three children

WAtoday Lachlan Abbott
Summary

From the report

The woman allegedly searched how to hurt children and sent a message about putting her baby up for adoption.

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This is a summary. The indicators are not. The scores were measured over this summary alone, which is less of the article than we would like and makes them less certain.

How outlets headlined it

Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.

  • WAtoday Mother accused of driving off boat ramp in failed attempt to murder her three children plain
  • The West Australian Drone attack kills three children and a woman in Kyiv plain
  • The West Australian Melbourne woman accused of attempting to kill three children by driving into creek plain

How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it

No other newsroom we read has filed on this event, so there is nothing to compare it with yet.

Also covered by The West Australian, Brisbane Times, The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
WAtodayas they published this story 8.8

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The same event elsewhere

5 other outlets filed this story. The scoreboard above is what they did differently.

The West Australian Drone attack kills three children and a woman in Kyiv Niral 2.1 political 0 The West Australian Melbourne woman accused of attempting to kill three children by driving into creek Niral 3 political 0 Brisbane Times Mother accused of driving off boat ramp in failed attempt to murder her three children Niral 8.7 political 0 The Age Mother accused of driving off boat ramp in failed attempt to murder her three children Niral 8.8 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Mother accused of driving off boat ramp in failed attempt to murder her three children Niral 8.8 political 0