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My suburb lacks an appeal to young adults. But moving back gives fresh perspective

WAtoday Angus Delaney
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  • the headline was changed: My suburb lacks the cool factor an appeal to young adults. But growing up here was a blessingmoving back gives fresh perspective

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As a kid, it had everything to want. Moving back after a few years away has given a fresh perspective.

The view from Stanley Street, Brisbane. 1873 library picture
Not from this story. A library photograph of australian parliament house, used to illustrate it. The view from Stanley Street, Brisbane. 1873 flickr, Public domain

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Also covered by The Sydney Morning Herald, Brisbane Times. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

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WAtodayas they published this story 18.6

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The Sydney Morning Herald My suburb lacks an appeal to young adults. But moving back gives fresh perspective Niral 18.6 political 0 Brisbane Times My suburb lacks an appeal to young adults. But moving back gives fresh perspective Niral 18.6 political 0