The registered nurse responsible for triaging Joe said inadequacies in the hospital’s system meant there was no alert to warn her of his abnormal heartbeat, and that if there had been, she would have escalated his care.
New South Wales
No warning, 12-year-old guidelines and a long shift: The litany of problems before Joe Massa’s death
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Ageas they published this story | 4.5 |
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