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Phillies scrape into MLB playoffs after week of ‘living hell in slow motion’

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  • Phillies were at risk of blowing comfortable wildcard lead.
  • The Phillies will play Game 1 in a best-of-three wildcard series on Tuesday in Atlanta against their NL East rivals, the Braves.

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Phillies were at risk of blowing comfortable wildcard lead. Their 7-3 win over the Tampa Bay Rays on Sunday clinched the final National League wildcard berth.

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Phillies were at risk of blowing comfortable wildcard lead.

Bryce Harper and Edmundo Sosa homered, and Zack Wheeler delivered like a Game 7 ace to bring the Philadelphia Phillies back from the brink of collapse and send them into the playoffs. Their 7-3 win over the Tampa Bay Rays on Sunday clinched the final National League wildcard berth.

The Phillies could have clinched a playoff berth as early as Wednesday before they lost four straight games and nearly coughed up their wildcard lead to Arizona.

The Phillies will play Game 1 in a best-of-three wildcard series on Tuesday in Atlanta against their NL East rivals, the Braves.

“It was kind of a living hell in slow motion,” Phillies managing partner and CEO John Middleton said of Philadelphia’s nervy last week.

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You are reading our version, not theirs. This is The Guardian Australia (Sport)'s report shortened to its most important sentences, in plainer words, with verdicts and loaded words taken out. Plain description stays, and so do adjectives that carry a fact, such as "former" or "federal". The reporting, the facts and the quotations are theirs — quotations are never edited — and the indicators beside it measure this version. Hover or tap Adjectives to see every one left in the text.

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Mundane Readneutralized from The Guardian Australia (Sport) 17.2 4 -0.1 29.4

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