Homicide detectives are investigating the death of an eight-month-old baby found unresponsive in Ballarat on the weekend.
The head of a family support service says the death of baby girl in the Victorian city of Ballarat is "absolutely tragic".
Child and Family Services chief executive Wendy Sturgess said the death has caused hurt in the community.
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Homicide detectives are investigating the death of an eight-month-old baby found unresponsive in Ballarat on the weekend.
Police are urging anyone with information to contact Crime Stoppers.
The head of a family support service says the death of baby girl in the Victorian city of Ballarat is "absolutely tragic".
Victoria Police said CPR was administered before she was taken to Ballarat hospital just after 1pm.
Child and Family Services chief executive Wendy Sturgess said the death has caused hurt in the community.
The Homicide Squad is continuing to investigate the death.
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