Contractors have disposed of abandoned camping materials on Memorial Drive in Rockingham as a police operation began to move on the remaining rough sleepers on the street.
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Police operation under way to move on last Memorial Drive rough sleepers
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- The Sydney Morning Herald Police operation under way to move on last Memorial Drive rough sleepers plain
- WAtoday Police operation moves on last Memorial Drive rough sleepers plain
How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it
No other newsroom we read has filed on this event, so there is nothing to compare it with yet.
Also covered by The Age, WAtoday, Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Sydney Morning Heraldas they published this story | 10.7 |
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The same event elsewhere
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