The West AustralianWild CCTV has captured the moment a group of thieves used a tractor to ram into a popular animal farm cafe, causing damage.
Courts / Melbourne, VIC
Police release CCTV after thieves ram tractor into Melbourne farm cafe
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How outlets headlined it
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- The West Australian Police release CCTV after thieves ram tractor into Melbourne farm cafe plain
- ABC News CCTV shows tractor ram raid at Melbourne cafe and animal farm plain
This is a summary. The indicators are not. The scores were measured over this summary alone, which is less of the article than we would like and makes them less certain.
How each outlet filed it
| Outlet | Niral Score | Adjectives | Sourcing | Sentiment | Happiness |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 18.1 | 2 | 42 | -0.1 | 50 |
| ABC News | 7.8 | 3 | 76 | -0.5 | 60.8 |
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