Simon Peter Carman, 45, was arrested over the death of Tunchanok Donhomla, 17, in the resort town of Pattaya in June.
Carman’s next court appearance is on October 12.
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Simon Peter Carman was arrested over the death of Tunchanok Donhomla in the resort town of Pattaya in June.
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An Australian man accused of murdering a Thai teenager and stuffing her body in a suitcase has pleaded not guilty to all charges against him during his first appearance in court.
Simon Peter Carman, 45, was arrested over the death of Tunchanok Donhomla, 17, in the resort town of Pattaya in June.
Authorities charged him with four offences, including murder, concealing a corpse, and abducting a minor.
Carman’s next court appearance is on October 12.
Carman allegedly met Donhomla, known locally as “Cake”, in Pattaya, about two hours south of Bangkok.
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