A teenage volleyball player is the third person to die after a horror crash in Victoria.
Victoria
Three killed in crash
From the report
Headline as published: Three killed in horror crash
This is a summary. The indicators are not. The scores were measured over this summary alone, which is less of the article than we would like and makes them less certain.
How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.
- The Age Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash plain
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Brisbane Times
Three killed in
horrorcrash 1 change
How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it
No other newsroom we read has filed on this event, so there is nothing to compare it with yet.
Also covered by The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald, Brisbane Times, WAtoday. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| Brisbane Timesas they published this story | 11.1 |
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The same event elsewhere
7 other outlets filed this story. The scoreboard above is what they did differently.
The Age
Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash
Niral 4.3
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash
Niral 4.3
political 0
Brisbane Times
Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash
Niral 4.3
political 0
WAtoday
Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash
Niral 4.3
political 0
The Age
Three killed in crash
Niral 11.1
political 0
WAtoday
Three killed in crash
Niral 11.1
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Three killed in crash
Niral 11.1
political 0