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90yo among three women dead in DV-related incidents in NSW in 24 hoursSydney man accused of stabbing 90-year-old to death blames Ozempic
the headline was changed:
Sydney man accused of stabbing 90-year-old mother to death blames Ozempic90yo among three women dead in DV-related incidents in NSW in 24 hours
the headline was changed:
Three women killed in NSW in 24 hoursSydney man accused of stabbing 90-year-old mother to death blames Ozempic
the headline was changed:
Three women killed in DV-related incidents in NSW in 24 hours
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Three women have been killed in separate domestic violence-related incidents across NSW within 24 hours.
About 5:15pm on Saturday, emergency services were called to a unit at Bondi Beach, where they found an elderly woman with stab wounds to her torso.
A 47-year-old man was arrested at the unit.
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Three women have been killed in separate domestic violence-related incidents across NSW within 24 hours.
Two women, aged 90 and 23, were fatally stabbed at homes in Bondi Beach and Kooringal in Wagga Wagga.
A third woman, aged 70, was found dead at a property in the state's Northern Tablelands region.
About 5:15pm on Saturday, emergency services were called to a unit at Bondi Beach, where they found an elderly woman with stab wounds to her torso.
Paramedics treated the 90-year-old but she died at the scene.
A 47-year-old man was arrested at the unit.
The man was refused bail and is due to appear before Bail Division Local Court on Sunday.
In Wagga Wagga, a 31-year-old man has been charged over the fatal stabbing of a 23-year-old woman.
A 18-year-old man was arrested at the scene and taken to Wagga Wagga Police Station, where he was released without charge.
About 8pm, police arrested a 31-year-old man at a nearby home on Menzies Avenue.
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