The West AustralianTransport Safety Bureau release preliminary reports into string of plane near-misses at Sydney Airport.
Sydney, NSW
Transport Safety Bureau release preliminary reports into string of plane near-misses at Sydney Airport
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How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.
- The West Australian Transport Safety Bureau release preliminary reports into string of plane near-misses at Sydney Airport plain
- WAtoday Sydney Airport near miss assessed at ‘most serious level’ plain
This is a summary. The indicators are not. The scores were measured over this summary alone, which is less of the article than we would like and makes them less certain.
How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it
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Also covered by WAtoday, The Age, Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 10.6 |
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The same event elsewhere
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WAtoday
Sydney Airport near miss assessed at ‘most serious level’
Niral 2 · calm
political 0
The Age
Sydney Airport near miss assessed at ‘most serious level’
Niral 2 · calm
political 0
Brisbane Times
Sydney Airport near miss assessed at ‘most serious level’
Niral 2 · calm
political 0
The Sydney Morning Herald
Sydney Airport near miss assessed at ‘most serious level’
Niral 2 · calm
political 0