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Trump arch to serve as 'military complex' housing drones and snipers

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  • US President Donald Trump says the large arch he wants to build in Washington DC would become a "top grade military complex" able to host drones and snipers while storing ammunition.
  • Mr Trump said in a social media post on Sunday that he had agreed, at the "strong request" of the military, to convert the planned 76-metre-tall memorial arch "into a top grade Military Complex/Triumphal Arch" between the Lincoln Memorial and Arlington National Cemetery.

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Though the arch has received early approval from the US Commission of Fine Arts a group of three veterans and an architectural historian sued.

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US President Donald Trump says the large arch he wants to build in Washington DC would become a "top grade military complex" able to host drones and snipers while storing ammunition.

The project has not yet received final approval from the National Capital Area Planning Commission, which is expected to take up the issue again in the next few months.

Mr Trump said in a social media post on Sunday that he had agreed, at the "strong request" of the military, to convert the planned 76-metre-tall memorial arch "into a top grade Military Complex/Triumphal Arch" between the Lincoln Memorial and Arlington National Cemetery.

Though the arch has received early approval from the US Commission of Fine Arts a group of three veterans and an architectural historian sued.

Shortened to 1 minute of reading, this version reads 6.3 on the Niral Score.

You are reading our version, not theirs. This is ABC News's report shortened to its most important sentences, in plainer words, with verdicts and loaded words taken out. Plain description stays, and so do adjectives that carry a fact, such as "former" or "federal". The reporting, the facts and the quotations are theirs — quotations are never edited — and the indicators beside it measure this version. Hover or tap Adjectives to see every one left in the text.

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  • ABC News Trump arch to serve as 'military complex' housing drones and snipers plain
  • WAtoday Trump arch to double as military complex plain
  • The West Australian Donald Trump announces planned Washington DC arch will be used as 'military complex' plain

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Also covered by WAtoday, The Age, Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald, The West Australian. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral ScoreAdjectivesSourcingSentimentHappiness
ABC Newsas they published this story 9.7 4 27 0.3 48.9
Mundane Readneutralized from ABC News 8.9 4 27 0.3 48.9

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