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Two killed, four injured in school-holiday crash involving learner driver

Brisbane Times Isabel McMillan
Summary
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  • the headline was changed: Two killed, four injured in horror school-holiday crash involving L-platerlearner driver

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From the report

Police said two people were killed after a car with L plates collided with a truck, which then hit another car, near the Grampians.

Headline as published: Two killed, four injured in horror school-holiday crash involving learner driver

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How outlets headlined it

Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.

  • The Age Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash plain
  • Brisbane Times Two killed, four injured in horror school-holiday crash involving learner driver 1 change

How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it

No other newsroom we read has filed on this event, so there is nothing to compare it with yet.

Also covered by The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald, Brisbane Times, WAtoday. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
Brisbane Timesas they published this story 18.3

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The same event elsewhere

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The Age Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash Niral 4.3 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash Niral 4.3 political 0 Brisbane Times Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash Niral 4.3 political 0 WAtoday Man killed and two others injured in Melbourne crash Niral 4.3 political 0 The Age Two killed, four injured in school-holiday crash involving learner driver Niral 18.3 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Two killed, four injured in school-holiday crash involving learner driver Niral 18.3 political 0 WAtoday Two killed, four injured in school-holiday crash involving learner driver Niral 18.3 political 0