Out of favour at Melbourne, Jack Viney will meet with West Coast, while in a blow to the Bombers, one of Adelaide’s top draft picks from six years ago has sought to move to the Crows’ cross-town rivals.
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Essendon land Longmire for head of performance role
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Viney flies west to visit Eagles’ nest, Bombers also in the marketEssendon land Longmire for head of performance role
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