Nickolas Wayne Peake, 30, pleads guilty in a Perth court after detectives charged him with aggravated common assault.
Courts / Perth, WA
WA police officer pleads guilty to assaulting his five-week-old baby
From the report
This is a summary. The indicators are not. The scores were measured over this summary alone, which is less of the article than we would like and makes them less certain.
How outlets headlined it
Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.
- ABC News WA police officer pleads guilty to assaulting his five-week-old baby plain
- The Sydney Morning Herald Perth police officer pleads guilty to assaulting his five-week-old baby plain
- The West Australian Nickolas Wayne Peake: WA Police officer fronts court accused of assaulting five-week-old baby plain
- The Age Police officer charged after allegedly assaulting five-week-old daughter plain
How this outlet filed it, and how we rewrote it
No other newsroom we read has filed on this event, so there is nothing to compare it with yet.
Also covered by The Sydney Morning Herald, The Age, Brisbane Times, WAtoday, The West Australian. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.
| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| ABC Newsas they published this story | 13.3 |
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The same event elsewhere
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The Sydney Morning Herald
Perth police officer pleads guilty to assaulting his five-week-old baby
Niral 4.2
political 0
The Age
Perth police officer pleads guilty to assaulting his five-week-old baby
Niral 4.2
political 0
Brisbane Times
Perth police officer pleads guilty to assaulting his five-week-old baby
Niral 4.2
political 0
WAtoday
Perth police officer pleads guilty to assaulting his five-week-old baby
Niral 4.2
political 0
The West Australian
Nickolas Wayne Peake: WA Police officer fronts court accused of assaulting five-week-old baby
Niral 4.2
political 0
The Age
Police officer charged after allegedly assaulting five-week-old daughter
Niral 5.7
political 0
Brisbane Times
Police officer charged after allegedly assaulting five-week-old daughter
Niral 5.7
political 0
WAtoday
Police officer charged after allegedly assaulting five-week-old daughter
Niral 5.7
political 0