Former Wallaby Nathan Charles has been diagnosed with motor neurone disease.
Queensland
Wallaby who overcame cystic fibrosis to play rugby diagnosed with MND
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Nathan Charles has said he has motor neurone disease. The 37-year-old publicly announced his diagnosis during an interview with Stan Sport.
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- ABC News Wallaby who overcame cystic fibrosis to play rugby diagnosed with MND plain
- The West Australian Former Wallabies player Nathan Charles diagnosed with motor neurone disease aged 37 plain
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Brisbane Times
He beat cystic fibrosis and became a Wallaby. Now Nathan Charles is fighting another
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| ABC Newsas they published this story | 6.6 |
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