Subscribe Sign in

Sport / Brisbane, QLD

When it mattered most in the AFL grand final Brisbane were at their imperious best | Jonathan Horn

The Guardian Australia (Sport)
1 min read Rewritten in plain language

AFLFremantle DockersBrisbane LionsSport

Show what we removed
  • The question of how the Dockers blew their shot at glory will haunt them for years, but the story of this grand final was the magnificence of the Lions.
  • You run into an open goal and you have a shot from centimetres out, you better make sure you kick it.
  • The final quarter will be remembered for a flurry of moments – moments of madness, brilliance, Swiss precision, confusion.
  • When Patrick Voss put the Dockers 17 points up in time-on, he set off on what was expected as a lap of the entire perimeter of the MCG.
  • Fremantle had their chances to win this grand final.

5 sentences from our version of the report, chosen to cover it. Nothing here is written; every line is in the article below. How

The story of this grand final was the….

Headline check

One of the two things this headline claims did not turn up in the report.

  • “Jonathan Horn” is named in the headline. We could not find it in the report.

Figures, names and quoted words in the headline, looked for in the report itself — not in the summary above. Names are matched as they are spelled, so a report that says “New South Wales” where the headline says “NSW” is queried here when it should not be. How this is checked

The question of how the Dockers blew their shot at glory will haunt them for years, but the story of this grand final was the magnificence of the Lions.

You ring your bell and you hoist your flag, you better make sure the game’s in the bag. You run into an open goal and you have a shot from centimetres out, you better make sure you kick it. Don’t get sucked into any narrative that Fremantle pissed this premiership away.

Brisbane won it on their merits.

The final quarter will be remembered for a flurry of moments – moments of madness, brilliance, Swiss precision, confusion.

We can’t tiptoe around it, or downplay it, or dismiss it altogether. When Patrick Voss put the Dockers 17 points up in time-on, he set off on what was expected as a lap of the entire perimeter of the MCG. No one knows whose finger hovers over the activation button.

Everything that makes the Lions a champion team was evident in those final few minutes. If you want to learn how to cooly exit a stoppage with bodies flailing all around you, study Ashcroft’s final quarter. If you want to know what motivates this team, and how not to press their buttons, listen to what the Lions’ players said after the game.

Fremantle had their chances to win this grand final.

At one stage he took off from half back like Byron Pickett in the 2004 decider – bouncing, weaving, cutting the Lions to ribbons. Dayne Zorko was at his best.

Shortened to 1 minute of reading, this version reads 10.3 on the Niral Score.

You are reading our version, not theirs. This is The Guardian Australia (Sport)'s report shortened to its most important sentences, in plainer words, with verdicts and loaded words taken out. Plain description stays, and so do adjectives that carry a fact, such as "former" or "federal". The reporting, the facts and the quotations are theirs — quotations are never edited — and the indicators beside it measure this version. Hover or tap Adjectives to see every one left in the text.

How outlets headlined it

Each outlet's own headline. Struck through: the loaded words our version leaves out. Plainest first.

  • The Guardian Australia (Sport) When it mattered most in the AFL grand final Brisbane were at their imperious best | Jonathan Horn plain
  • SBS News 2026 AFL Grand Final: When is it, who's playing and how to watch plain
  • SBS News Brisbane lions win AFL Grand Final in nail-biting finish against Fremantle Dockers plain
  • The Age AFL Grand Final 2026 plain
  • The Age AFL grand final 2026 plain

How each outlet filed it

Also covered by The Age, Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral ScoreAdjectivesSourcingSentimentGenderHappiness
The Guardian Australia (Sport)as they published this story 25.4 25 1 -0.2 0 36
SBS News 8.9 6 26 -0.2 3.4 39.8
SBS News 13.3 10 1 0.1 0 57.5
Mundane Readneutralized from SBS News 7.5 5 26 -0.2 0 39.8

Sign in to react.

Comments

Nothing here yet.

Sign in to comment.

Questions

Readers can ask a question about this story here. Questions and answers are for subscribers. Sign in to read them.

Comments are read before they appear where anything in them needs a person to look. Nothing posted here is ever deleted; a comment taken down keeps its text and the reason, so the decision can be looked at again. How this works

The same event elsewhere

8 other outlets filed this story. The scoreboard above is what they did differently.