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Sydney, NSW

Woman allegedly restrained, choked and sexually assaulted in Sydney park attack

The Age Amber Schultz
Summary

From the report

Padstow man Jesse Lee Hardy, 27, has been arrested and charged with choking, kidnapping and serious sexual assault offences.

How outlets headlined it

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  • The Age Woman allegedly restrained, choked and sexually assaulted in Sydney park attack plain
  • Brisbane Times Man arrested over alleged sexual assault in Sydney park plain
  • The West Australian Man arrested for Homebush parkland sexual assault plain

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Also covered by Brisbane Times, The Sydney Morning Herald, WAtoday, The Age, The West Australian. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
The Ageas they published this story 9.5

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Brisbane Times Woman allegedly restrained, choked and sexually assaulted in Sydney park attack Niral 9.5 · calm political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Woman allegedly restrained, choked and sexually assaulted in Sydney park attack Niral 9.5 · calm political 0 WAtoday Woman allegedly restrained, choked and sexually assaulted in Sydney park attack Niral 9.5 · calm political 0 Brisbane Times Man arrested over alleged sexual assault in Sydney park Niral 1.7 · calm political 0 The Age Man arrested over alleged sexual assault in Sydney park Niral 1.7 · calm political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Man arrested over alleged sexual assault in Sydney park Niral 1.7 · calm political 0 WAtoday Man arrested over alleged sexual assault in Sydney park Niral 1.7 · calm political 0 The West Australian Man arrested for Homebush parkland sexual assault Niral 29.8 · loaded political 0