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Police probe woman’s cause of death after body found in Brisbane unit industrial bin

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  • the headline was changed: Police probe woman’s cause of death after body found in Brisbane unit industrial binat inner-Brisbane unit block

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The discovery came as workers were emptying a large bin at the unit complex in Kangaroo Point.

Kangaroo Point Esplanade, Artist Impressions of Approach under Captain Cook Bridge; Walk at base cliffs; View across river in watercolour, three A4 paintings - Art by Ronald Wu, Department of Public Works, 2001
Kangaroo Point Esplanade, Artist Impressions of Approach under Captain Cook Bridge; Walk at base cliffs; View across river in watercolour, three A4 paintings - Art by Ronald Wu, Department of Public Works, 2001 flickr, Public domain

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  • Brisbane Times Police probe woman’s cause of death after body found in Brisbane unit industrial bin plain
  • 7NEWS Police probe death of person found unresponsive at Kangaroo Point, Brisbane plain

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Also covered by 7NEWS, WAtoday, The Age, The Sydney Morning Herald. We hold only their summary of it, not the report, so there is nothing of theirs to measure here.

Outlet Niral Score
Brisbane Timesas they published this story 27.9

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7NEWS Police probe death of person found unresponsive at Kangaroo Point, Brisbane Niral 24.6 political 0 WAtoday Police probe woman’s cause of death after body found in Brisbane unit industrial bin Niral 27.9 political 0 The Age Police probe woman’s cause of death after body found in Brisbane unit industrial bin Niral 27.9 political 0 The Sydney Morning Herald Police probe woman’s cause of death after body found in Brisbane unit industrial bin Niral 27.9 political 0