NSW police allege the men, aged 18, 19 and 20, broke into homes in Arncliffe and Bankstown this week before assaulting the women aged 31 and 32.
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Women hospitalised and three men charged with assault and choking after separate home invasions in Sydney
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- The Guardian Australia Women hospitalised and three men charged with assault and choking after separate home invasions in Sydney plain
- WAtoday Sydney home invasion gang allegedly raped, assaulted women in separate attacks plain
- The West Australian Two women allegedly assaulted by gang of home invaders in week of terror in Sydney plain
- The West Australian Women allegedly attacked in two separate home invasions plain
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The Guardian Australiaas they published this story | 13.8 |
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