The West AustralianThe high school student finished his last day of Year 12 on cloud nine after hitting the shot of a lifetime during a school golf competition.
Young gun Shayne Lumsden makes hole-in-one during Como Secondary College golf competition
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Headline as published: Young gun Shayne Lumsden makes incredible hole-in-one during Como Secondary College golf competition
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| Outlet | Niral Score |
|---|---|
| The West Australianas they published this story | 22.1 |
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